It's not written by a native English speaker, that much is for certain. Frequently omits a, the, and plethora of other words. They also reverse words so that the sentences make no sense. The writing is confusing. Most sentences use the incorrect tense of a word, and some words are completely inaccurate or wrong. Using 'can' when 'could' is correct is one example. They use "something" when they mean "anything." 

 Darci's other name must be Marcel Marceau. She looks more like a mime than a goth girl.

Drow; or the correct spelling, Drau, are Dokkalfar.

It's not "I think it's 'a' destiny", it is written as "I think it's destiny."

"Maybe you'll come without me" is incorrect. The correct way is "Maybe you should go without me." 

It's not "I couldn't say better." it is "I couldn't have said it better."

It's not "The time will tell" it is "Only time will tell." 

Why do writers always end sentences with "and stuff"? Stuff is a word that the writer who doesn't know the name of whatever he/she is trying to describe. It also shows the immaturity of the writer. 

I like the story very much. But reading it, with its butchered English, often leaves me with a headache.