Very good, but the writer's English is atrocious. In particular, they have trouble knowing when use singular or plural in a sentence. The words that the writer uses are not always what a seasoned English speaker/reader considers to be appropriate for the situation that they are used in. 

This creator REALLY needs a competent English writer to correct their errors.

Mori Yuki? Really? That is the name of the heroine in Uchuu Senkan Yamato.