Excellent characters, worldbuilding, and visuals. The Gothic Steampunk look and the willingness to wear the lust for extreme size on it's sleeve while still wrapping it a fascinating mythos is refreshing. I love how well it drops fascinating questions and mysteries and teases the audience with slow and well paced story drops.
However, there are some small problems that keep it from being perfect. It has issues with some of it's fonts, which can sometimes be clipped or get distorted taking you out of the story. There are also some animations where the AI doesn't seem to quite understand what is actually happening, and while the flowing almost liquid effect is taking striking imagery and making it legitimately dreamlike, it again doesn't quite fit the descriptions given, taking you a bit out of the experience.
However, this is early on, and all of these issues are minor and correctible - the stories, characters, world and imagery are all stellar. this has the potential to be a truly phenomenal.
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