- Barely runs at 30 fps, the camera jerks, stutters.

 - There's no gameplay, no controls, LMB is the only action. You can only walk and listen to NPC monologues about how they hate their bodies. That's it. 

- It doesn't matter what the author was trying to say; first, you need to hook the player, but here the game demands that you hook yourself.

- Game begin at small corridor. if walk outside  you'll see - the wall. Betrayed expectations.