Really like the premise so far and foundation of the game.

Could definitely use more character development and background story. 

Story and character interactions feel really rushed. My suggestion: have more depth & connection, but maintain the same feel of MC's dominance and assertion over everything - especially keeping the feeling of how submissive the girls are to MC

Aurora could be more affectionate.

Olivia's pretty annoying, to be honest. This should definitely be a male dom relationship.  

When MC and Mia were fooling around - why the hell was she wearing clothes? That was dumb