Really like the premise so far and foundation of the game.
Could definitely use more character development and background story.
Story and character interactions feel really rushed. My suggestion: have more depth & connection, but maintain the same feel of MC's dominance and assertion over everything - especially keeping the feeling of how submissive the girls are to MC
Aurora could be more affectionate.
Olivia's pretty annoying, to be honest. This should definitely be a male dom relationship.
When MC and Mia were fooling around - why the hell was she wearing clothes? That was dumb
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