I'm not much of a coder, but  I think there are some errors, like a delay in characters disappearing and stuff. I also think that some details are missing, so I needed to use my imagination, such as when someone was following me, then I glanced back, so what happened? What did I find? I don't remember reading it. The backgrounds need a bit more focus, and it will be perfect. Actually, I like the story and the characters, especially Evren (>//<)!! The game just needs some edits, and it's gonna be fireeee!!!!