I'm so glad I played this, such a sweet game. I really love the ambition, the shifting between tense and perspective. I loved the blurring of the lines between play and reality. 
I did get a little distracted by some of the typos, it may not have bothered me as much, historically being someone who is awful at catching my own, but juxtaposed with a lead who would correct other people's made them stand out a touch more. 
I will be thinking however, about the moment where Dee was putting together her outfit, Her inheritance well earned.