The art style is gorgeous and I like how eerie everything is. Jestyn's expressions changing minutely when the protagonist was on the phone with their debt collector was amazing, I could see that there was attention to detail. 

There are some errors in the text, mostly in lack of punctuation and verb tenses. But even with the errors, it's readable and the plot flows nicely. 

Despite choosing specific pronouns Jestyn called my character both king and queen at points, which is pretty jarring.

I'm intrigued to see what the full game would look like (at the dev's pace because we do not pressure). This was great.