Likes: 

• Unique plot twist of the Yandere
• Design of Mould
• Practicality of the main character given the situation
• English translation available

Suggestions/Comments:

• The pace of the game is slow with heavy dialogue and limited action. The ending was so abrupt on Day 1 that I actually thought I may have encountered a bug and played through a second time.
• Despite the heavy dialogue, there are still a lot of unanswered questions about the main character, their relationship with their grandfather, and Mould.
• It feels like Mould is going to fall into the "Born Sexy Yesterday" trope based on current dialogue. This is honestly more of a personal dislike because I feel uncomfortable with the idea of someone effectively raising an individual and then turning around to date/marry them.
• While I think the current English translation of the transcript is capable of being read, I think it would heavily benefit from having some native English speakers provide feedback on word choice and grammar for improved flow.