The concept is interesting. A sentient AI who highjacks your computer and cybernetics in order to control and seduce you? Fascinating! The art is beautiful, the UI is clean, and Veiss's design is wonderful.

However, the dialogue is rough and the delivery really doesn't help. Somethings are better read than said aloud. There's too much trying to be sexy and not enough actual sexiness. Every other word is "Songbird". Veiss comes on so strong, he sounds like a mid-aughts pick-up artist. 

MC simps for him immediately. There's not enough build up. There need to be a little tension, a little yearning. Instead, they come across as pathetic. I found myself cringing through every interaction between the two.