Stellar introduction to a cold and beautiful world!
The music is touching, refined, and delightfully composed.
Lynn is a compelling protagonist with a few tricks up his sleeve, while Rali has a bit to be desired. His dialogue sections seem sterile and descriptive. He doesn't seem to have any agency of his own, and feels more of a literary device than a character.
I'd love to work with you more on the script and characters, and maybe compare workflow notes between our projects.
The sprites are done with care, and I love the pastel style. Their design is cohesive, their figures are memorable, and the color palette is harmonious to the atmosphere.
You should be very proud! I found this work-in-progress immediately gripping. The premise is captivating, and the music is divine.
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