My only slight gripe was when Vergil started monologuing/trauma dumping, I feel like it could've been broken up better and increase the engagement for a smoother read. BUT it also feels on par with his character of having obsessive and manic tendencies that he would just dump a bunch of lore in the heat of the moment, plus given its a short game style, I understand.
Really fun read nonetheless :)
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