Art is wonderful, but the writing is a heavy anchor dragging this down. Everything is horrifically short and lifeless. It's only a notch above a paragraph describing generic vore. The art does some heavy lifting, but there's not enough to make up for it. The swallowing happens in 3 brief sentences and there is almost no flavor text at all for...well, any of the vore. The thing we're here for. You get a little melty and then it's over. 

I played this when it first came to itch and figured that after all this time, surely it would be a bit more fleshed out by now. It's not. This is little more than a ~taste~ of what could be, yet every scene manages to only leave one hungry for more.