this is a nice short read, the relationship between satsuki and urara is really incomprehensible, in the pleasant unpleasant way, but i really like that the dynamic between them remained the same until the very end. satsuki is still the one holding the leash- the god?- even with how terribly urara wanted to defile her... or so that is what i feel. it is a bit difficult keeping track of the other characters' relationship to urara though.
and i don't know if it is intentional, but the writing and atmosphere really remind me of tsui no sora (positive). probably it's the abrupt mentions of philosophy and the shorter sentences and the loads of repetition. it's something pleasant to read.
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