Forgot to post a review here... Oops.

I played this a few days when you posted I think, and I must say... This is a great improvement compared to your last game, BUT...

I think the grammar and the way of writing is just terrible... It might be better on Spanish, which seems to be your main language, but on english everything feels a bit weird and robotic, if that makes sense lol.

I LOVED the story and idea behind it, seriously, but I think you could have done a bit better on the writing, that's all... Some of the text not having a point in the middle pissed me off a little not gonna lie lol.
Also, who the heck says pc instead of computer??? English is not my main language, but some the text felt really weird to read...

Ignore this, the game has a beautiful scene building, story, and lighting as well, really good job on it! I don't think there's a need to go back and fix that, so keep that in mind for future games, please. :)