The story is rough around the edges at the beginning with the way the scenes flow. And it's obvious that English is not the writer's first language. However for a gamejam project and a first project for this team, this is a fun and sexy read. The sexual tension and sexual release of Rene and Martin is well worth going through the roughness. Especially the writing in the docking scene. I also appreciate that for a gamejam project, the team went out of the way to put some touches like blinking sprites and creating their own music as well as the art assets that were created.