A wonderful short story with excellent art, characters, setting, custom music and premise.

SPOILERS AHEAD: I'm a bit of a sucker for stories involving older love interests, and like the simple trope of getting to meet someone you admire... and actually finding they are the same as what you envisioned, if not better.  Subverting the hero expectation has become so common, it's no longer a plot twist.

I felt most of the elements were very deliberate in the setup and payoff of the story without having a lot of extra fluff to drag the plot and pacing down.

Realizing that for many of the core members on the team this was their first foray into making a vn, I feel they did a great job in executing their vision for the project.

There were some (mostly minor) grammatical issues, however they did not detract from the experience for me, and I anticipate they'll be addressed in a future update once editing submissions is allowed.

I found the art to be colorful and expressive with a unified style.  The music also fit the retro theme of the jam and also worked together cohesively, giving a themed soundtrack quality to the story.

To me, it felt like a well-knit project altogether, with the various creators working seamlessly together in their objective.

I look forward to what these creators do in the future, whether as a team or individually.