While the visual novel is short, I think it was really well made. The music and artistic visuals are great. One slight I have is on the eyes. In some models they look weird. Everything else though is great. This presentation gives a promise for more quality storytelling. It's unfortunate the project seems to be halted. I would enjoy any continuation of it.
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