The... voice direction was good? Honestly this game kinda quickly devolved into a wild ramble that could (and should) have been a blog post. I appreciate the self disclosure, but it tilts between oversharing, and coming off as a little disingenuous. I admire wanting to get something out, but you did still have another 15 days past when you submitted, maybe working an actual vn out instead of an arbitrary deadline would have been better. Because right now this is just a voice acted crisis with some assets shoehorned in, presented in renpy. Again I understand where you're coming from, I just don't know that this was the place to post these revelations.
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