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I really liked Zephyr being an unconventional vampire and the mystery was surprising. Timely placed vignettes and interesting 3rd ending execution.

Btw, about Zephyr's childlikeness, I can understand how it might be uncomfortable for some people, but I actually know people with similar behavior IRL. Just my 2 cents in case someone thinks it's totally unrealistic.