Thank you for the story and good job! 

I like Pascal a lot already and I can't wait to see Thierry's reaction to Charlie and Ophelia being the same person lol. I was freaking out because I thought Charlie was going to tell Thierry the truth in this chapter, haha.

Also, about your author's note: take as long as you need to make your chapters; I have set alerts on for you since I read Chapter 1 lol. I will come running to your next chapter whenever you post it. I'm always excited about what happens next in this story.