hey Bugs, time for words.

Oh, you're a Koi porn game alright, just not an AVN. Yeah, and what's the difference? PRESENTATION! welcome to the jungle intensifies. Music and visuals, amazing. Music choices are good as always, though I'm not sure if whativelost being so quiet was intentional. Sets the mood right and nicely follows the events. Visuals are great, really see the progress and soul put in this. Lighting, positioning, texture, designs are pretty good, though again, some outfits and furniture don't really seem to match the medieval setting(*). The texture of apples can be sometimes weird, but overall great job. Especially the campfire. Nightmare sequence was very good. I don't have much to say because I have no idea about koi and art and I'm a goober, but I enjoyed it. GUI is good, especially since you mentioned soon-to-be improvement

The story implications and narrative. Storytelling seems to be much more indiscrete and focused, less of a SoL and pretty heavy. Unacceptance and prejudice in the core theme, a mental fight and test for MC as the story driver, complicated relationships and an adorable LI - really good. I'm enjoying a lot of setups and clues planted in details, like the high five and cocky dialogues.  Pacing is not boring and  conflicts are interesting, but again, some ideas don't seem to match the medieval setting, like open relationships Sarah proposes(*). 

(*) - I'm no expert in history, and this is a fictional world with ideas and technological development different from our world, and this is why I'd love more worldbuilding dia-/mono- logues, because so far I'm pretty lost on what to expect. Story could really use some insights to have a reference in mind, sooner or later

Overall great job, definitely looking forward to more stuff. Good luck, keep it up