Nice preamble, very well structured and deep (for a "first chapter"), maybe could use a bit of work with the setting (a big map, with a lot of obstacles that are "inert"). I do love the concept, but the fact that there's no native english support bothers me quite a lot (having to go find a drive link for a fan-made pre-compiled translation is very annoying). Definitely looking forward to some updates!
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