This is the cutest damn thing I've beheld in a while. If it weren't in the rpgmaker contest (congrats on a deserved 1st place btw!) I wouldn't have even known it was made in rpgmaker. The only bit of feedback i could suggest is a custom font for the dialogue. I notice you already altered most else! :3
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