The game is good, especially for a debut and essentially first experience at all. It is very promising, but I would say it is pretty raw as it is now. It applies to visuals, some writing moments, and other stuff I mentioned in the discord. Music is good, humour is absurd and fun, inner monologues are amusing until they become repetitive, which they sometimes do. Writing has good parts, dream is a pretty good narrative device for example. On Tom part things are better, or at least I like them more due to seriousness and just more insights per scene in general, since he can self-reflect clearer than kaitlyn for obvious reasons. Built-in guide at first was questionable decision, but I understand and like the idea to not waste player's time on nothing. Thank you bill. The game has good potential, and I'm looking forward to its development.