The characters aren't really developed. The game throws you new character after new character and it's just too overwhelming. I don't know who's important and who to care for. 

Also the way the lines are displayed takes up more time than if they were all together. So for example a character says, "Hey, I'm going home. I heard it's not safe here at night." How the game currently is, the player would only see the first sentence, then have to press space/enter/left-click to see the second sentence. There's enough room in the dialogue box to both so I find changing the way the text is displayed can reduce artificial waiting and repetitive pressing/clicking. 

For the overall visauls, it's good. I think the UI at least for pause menu can be a bit simplified since I found it a bit too cluttered. The writing needs a major revamp per points I made earlier.