It's pretty good I would honestly give it a 4 out of 5 but I wanna support you so I'm giving it a 5/5. I think my biggest issue with the story so far is it seems fairly predictable. Usually when I read a new VN I skip it until I get to where it's interesting and so far your hasn't gotten super interesting yet. That being said, I do find the dialogue really good and I might came back to it again because I did enjoy the jokes and the dialogue in general seemed above average/good.