Loved the writing! Every screen had what felt like just the right amount of information on it, and the choices always felt realistic and impactful (even when they technically weren't). The entire thing did feel a bit short though... I expected it to last a bit longer, and decided to act slightly stand-offish at first to make it a proper slowburn, so the surprise bad ending really threw me off. Otherwise this is probably the best short interactive novel I've read recently! Def one of my favorites.

Also, shouldn't this be tagged as "interactive fiction"? Just wondering