I like the characters except the MC who suffers too much from one-sided daddy issues. He's like, "Ugh, why didn't my dad tell me anything about his job and his company". He's in college and should know the basics or at least the concept of a non-disclosure agreement. Also he never signed one when he onboarded at the company lol.
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