as a vampire-obsessed lesbian I found this very enjoyable! there were some small inconsistencies here and there along with some duplicate and potentially missing words, but nothing so egregious that I was taken out of the story. the world building in particular is really well done imo as you really get a sense of how things work in this world even in the short time we spend here. I personally enjoyed "So, About Last Night..." a lot as well so I'd love to read more!