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Iv read many things both tame and to the extreems from dark to soft relationships. I'll read just about anything and its always that little things that end up anoying me. I may change this in the future but I am currently writing this while angry. The story is good for the most part, I do hate the fact that the creator give option, that from the character as not wanting to do something and tring to get way from it but still makes the character do them. Simply dont give choices in those moments then. Choose to regect the beer type drink and your kissing an ugly chick pushing it down your throat. Theses a second choice to reject again and if u do it means nothing. Like the choices chossen that make the character show that they are unconfterbale and reject the persons advances mean nothing. The character will even after drinking the character who acts sober then sleeps with the character that they have no interest in. Why? It would be so much easier to just have them drug him to progress the story. This way the character does not lose the kiss and virginity to the person they were obviously not interested in. For situations that need to be forced for the specific narative to be pushed when dealing with stories must be done in a more dark way otherwise you make a character thats empty and hallow that leads to the readers and content enjoyers not attached to the character and leave. People who hold the skip button the whole time wont care, and over a third of most readers will just push it to the side and keep reading, while others are going to leave and not return.
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