Obviously this caters for a specific market and won't suit some people. It is excellent at what it's trying to be - yes the graphics could be a little better, but the quality of the story and writing is generally more important and this game has a great premise which is well executed.
Of things I'd like to see, possibly more of a story-mode (less running around!). More reminders about when and where to go (the home computer screen is excellent, but not accessible when out and about). Most importantly, a way of continuing! Being stopped at 12 tasks mean you can't do all of them, and then have to plan which ones you do - not easy given the inter-dependence of the tasks.
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