Dont know why you wrote the MC as a literal dipshit for plot relevance. Could've been done more uniquely so it wasnt a drag.

Update. Wow is he continuously annoying and a pussy.

new update, fully caught up with current build.

You really need to invite several people on board to help you learn how to make dialogue less cringe and shit.  

You LITERALLY recycle the same fucking joke over and over again THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE GAME, the same god damn situations over and over. Here's your cucked example chief.. EVERY SINGLE TIME a girl mentions him fucking another girl or talking about being filled with his cum or literally ANYTHING along the lines of him being "embarrassed' you do it in the EXACT SAME WAY.... Where is the variation on delivery. I have skipped a solid 40% of this games dialogue because of how you delivered it. But dont worry, before any assumptions are made....

I MADE SURE THAT I WAS SKIPPED TRASH DIALOGUE AND SURE ENOUGH!!!!!!

.... and the only people who "change" are the girls while the MC maintains a stupid ignorant dipshit personality that is overly sensitive, constantly saying things like a stupid "pick me" girl.

How about making a man act like a man? and not a bratty little girl.

And who the actual fuck came up with ANY of the humor? Not a single joke or line of dialogue even fit when you tried entering "humor" into this.