A very short, but really interesting story. The art is very charming, the writing is great & the descriptive aspects give good weight to the situations, and the music choices are great (no idea if they're from free sources or not). 

My only feedback would be that the story is one of those that can be confusing to follow on a first read-through due to the sudden shifts to different scenarios. I think putting a "The next morning..." or "Later in the day..." would help to make things less confusing. 

Overall, this was great, especially for a first visual novel.