This one was a bit hard for me to get into.

First of all, I like the presentation and the art is very cute. I also appreciated the poetry sections!

I found the prose a bit hard to enjoy though. While I got a pretty basic idea of what the main conflict of the story was and what the story was about, what exactly is going on a line-by-line basis was often confusing (I am an ESL speaker though, so take my words with a grain of salt).

Still commendable as a first VN!