I just finished the game. It's increadibly polished, and i can see the effort and passion you put into it. This game could easily be worth $20, but you made it free, and i'm really grateful for that.
The game has fantasy elements, but all the love interests are just normal girls. Even Calypso doesn't have a romance route. At the beginning, there's a dream where a girl asks for help, and we choose yes or no. I thought we might get an evil girl, but no. All the girl characters and their personalities feel almost the same. Even the loner Alex, who's set up as a very cool girl, loses her cool after a few scenes. especially when she goes to Eternum, she act the same as Nova.
The girls and the protagonist can't stay serious, and the game becomes more of a comedy, which makes the story lose tension and interest. The story is okay and the writing kept me hooked for a day, but it could be much better if the comedy was toned down. Even though it's meant to be funny, it didn't make me laugh at all. Maybe i just call the character being silly more than being funny.
The graphics are beautiful, and the girls look cute and sexy. The music is also very good-some songs made me sit there to listen on loop.
Thank you for making this game and letting me play it for free. This is my honest opinion, and i hope you don't find it offensive.
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