The overarching plot, details and twists were very innovative and well done, but it took too long for the game to get interesting. If it's supposed to be a dating sim gone wrong, then focus on the writing aspect of the dating sim part. It was extremely stale and hard to get through. I also don't get why this isn't called Doki Doki Poetry Club. They basically just did poetry.
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