Weird and chaotic demo for something that feels like it desperately wants to be a film. You have some interesting ideas with the jump cuts and playing as multiple players, allowing the viewer to get the full breath of perspectives on the game, but the tonal whiplash with some of the writing and general focus on less interaction makes this feel like someone's pitch for a film project.
I hope you're still workin on it, dev. I may not like your game, but you got something there.
Also guh
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