I believe this game has huge potential. The presentation is simple but beautiful. I love this art style. The small palette and straight lines almost invite-in the reader to help build the world.

Opposite those points is the writing. It is very excessive. It seems like a deliberate choice, but the way the narrative stretches out every sentence becomes tiring quickly. The mellow music and calm narration highlight the slow pace even more. There are some interesting plot points here, but they are muddled by the indulgent writing. A simple sentence can be just as effective as a complex one. Sometimes more so.

That said, I'm  looking forward to how this VN changes and evolves. I'm rooting for you all!