For an interactive fiction piece, although unfinished at time of writing, this one is most definitely a cut above. The story has an interesting premise that is easy to grasp, and has a fascinating and mysterious agency to it, all of it introduced quickly yet without feeling rushed. Most choices feel like real decisions rather than arbitrary prompts, the characters and writing are good, and I rarely if ever was jolted out of the story by the prose. Good immersion, solid concept, and well executed, I look forward to this one day being completed.