Despite being one of the longest entries in the jam, the story would probably benefit from a little more room to breathe. The dialogues, in particular, were a bit too focused on delivering exposition and left little time to develop the characters. Still, it was a fun ride and the premise was probably one of the most interesting ones out of all the jam entries.
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