A fun ride. A few of the twists here or there feel a bit unfair but for the most part it's really nice. The author's really good with characterization and anyone who enjoys contemporary murder mysteries, especially VNs I think, will have a good time here. At just around 100 pages, the story is well paced and there's never a moment where I feel things are going too slow/fast. The tone and style is a bit edgy, this story would fit in a Hot Topic catalogue, but it's not especially crass and if you like that sort of thing you'll have a good time. I have some smaller critiques but they don't take away from the overall enjoyable experience.
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