I like the cover of the "dark" story behind children and cartoonistic graphics. This concept and the first riddle make me believe that this game is going to be both challenging to solve and fun to explore the storyline. Also, totally appropriate for children but still interesting for grown-ups. Overall, an admirable effort.
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