What a solid premise this game offers, gentlemen. Now, this is how you sell something. 

Great characters, great plot, great pacing, and great milfs. I'm sold.

Some stuff you could improve is the proportions of some characters. Some of them feel way too tall compared to the MC, but other than that, you are doing great in terms of character design.

Also, there are some typos here and there, but nothing some online text corrector can't fix. 

I wish you good luck with this project. I'm rooting for your success. 

Godspeed.