Honestly pretty funny game, and it is written really well. Only really docking the points here for 2 main reasons. 1. There's not much...pushback from the main character here. There's very little time where you can try and beat the system only to lose in the end. I wish there was a bit more you can do of the "no" side where you can try to fight against it, only to realize that you have made a VERY bad mistake. Maybe something like hiding a "turn off the game" button that slowly gets dimmer and dimmer and harder to pin down as it jumps across the screen or something. On top of that, you could even have an ending that leads back into the game like "And so...I put the game down. I'm not sure what happened with that, but it seemed odd to me...almost as if trying to drag (link here on drag) me back into it..." would definitely play into the helplessness of the situation a bit more.

2. This one is more completely on me and not you, but...this is very sub focused and from first stage to last stage. Idk, what if there are paths that make us the one on top? Maybe have it where the pokemon evolves depending on the choices made through the story? That and there were a lot of feet choices when it got to where you're in the pokemon world. Not personally my kink, but not gonna knock you on it.

Overall a pretty funny read, but I admit that I wasn't really able to get through any of the paths with how weird it got.