Any and all grammatical errors I've may have seen was pointed out in my let's play series of this game.
Love the game. Love the art. Love the MUSIC! This project is beautiful and I appreciate what you're doing with Elliot's route specifically.
If you're curious about any possible spelling or grammatical errors feel free to watch my Let's Play of it though it's just a casual reactionary commentary as I play the game. Not a specific critique video. (Links not working so here's the channel: https://www.youtube.com/@orgaysis ) The playlist should be on the homepage under "NSFW Visual Novels"
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