I liked this little game quite a bit, the little conversations between the two very different characters were fun to listen to and the mystery element was interesting. I was on the edge of if it would actually be a haunted house or not, which made the twist all the more entertaining. The humor of the RPG fighting scene, saying Bloody Mary three times vs. not saying it, and other little things like that made the atmosphere a bit silly and didn't really send chills through my body, even though the twist in the bedroom was a bit scary at first. There were some grammar mistakes that took me out of the story for a bit but they were mostly at the start so it was okay. Though, in the future I would suggest the creator get a text editor to check the text over. All in all, this creator makes pretty good visual novels and I especially love the character design, one of my favorites being Symbiosis.
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