One annoying thing I learned about RPG maker is that you can't save in a cutscene, thus since this build technically counts as one, one cannot save. With such a long narrative, i'd prefer to save if I have to stop reading for some reason.

The story is fine at this point, but the presentation is lacking.

Only having one sprite per character makes some scenes (like the cafeteria scene) rather stale and static. The backgrounds are also a bit unrealistic for the setting (college room). 

This is a demo, so i'm sure some of this stuff might change over time. I'll be sure to give another/more detailed look when a finished build comes out.

Rating: 2.5/5