Very engaging story. Interesting characters. As the spouse of a recovering alcoholic (32 years sober!), I'm learning more than I thought I would.
But some very unrealistic things pull the reader out of the story a bit too often. Things like:
But, I'm still learning and enjoying the story in spite of the unrealistic things.
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