I had a lot of fun in this game.  There were times when the prompts seemed unclear and I wasn't sure how to proceed next, but at least the grinding (what there was of it) was very minimal.  And it gave the player much more agency than most VNs on Itch.io.  My only suggestion would be to streamline the story a bit more and/or make it clearer what to do next.  The artistic style was delightful.